Month: November 2022
JAKE IN TROUBLE FOR THEFT!
Last Friday, a family of puppies were sad when a boy stole their treats.
Daddy Puppy, Mummy Puppy and Baby Puppy went to the woods for a run.
Jake broke into their burrow and drank their milk.
“I am so sad because that nasty boy took my baby’s treats!” said Daddy Puppy.
The police are still looking for the thief.
If you find Jake the thief, call 999!
Newspaper report by a child in 3J.
A super independent write.
On Monday morning, the bears house was robbed.
The bear family were furious, somebody ate their porridge, sat in their chairs and slept in their beds. Baby bear was crying because somebody broke his chair. Daddy bear was furious. Mummy bear was angry.
This evening, Baby bear spoke to a reporter and said ” There was somebody in our house and somebody ate my porridge, broke my chair and slept in our beds. I feel really upset.”
Now the Bear family are asking if anybody sees somebody with blonde hair to call 0800 555 111.
We have chose this work for great detail and excellent language.
RED IN DANGER
Yesterday morning, Red discovered a wolf was in grandma’s bed snoring loudly.
Red of Fairy-Tale Cottage, was left standing horrified after finding a wolf fast asleep in Grandma’s bed, wearing her clothes, when she visited Grandma’s house, yesterday morning.
During the night of the ordeal, Red got consumed by the wolf herself. Whilst in the wolf’s stomach, Red found out that her grandma had been eaten by the wolf.
Meanwhile, a woodcutter passed by. He heard a horrendous snoring sound coming from Grandma’s house. He knew that was not how Grandma snores, so he went inside. He was astonished when he found a wolf sleeping in Grandma’s bed, so he got a pair of scissors and cut the wolf’s tummy open. Grandma and Red jumped out of the wolf’s tummy happily and they put some stones in the wolf’s stomach and hid outside. As the wolf was waking up, he felt pain and then died.
Red went to the radio reporter and she said ” It was the most horrifying experience we ever had. I saw no Grandma and a wolf wearing Grandma’s clothes and his snore was louder than a man’s snore. As a result of the ordeal, I am scared that another wolf will return.” She said shedding a tear.
“Thankfully, Grandma is hale and hearty.” Said Red. She is pleading for any help finding someone to stop wolves terrorizing people everywhere.
This week we have chosen this piece of work for great use of fronted adverbials.
RED IN DANGER
On Thursday, Red went to Grandma’s cottage and was distressed to find a wolf in Grandma’s bed, with Grandma’s clothes on.
Little Red Riding Hood from Fairy tale Village, was left frozen in fear after her Grandma was nowhere to be found.
During the ordeal, Red was also eaten by the wolf.
This evening, Red spoke to one of our reporters, “It was the most terrifying thing I have ever experienced. I hope the wolf never comes back!” Red said crying in fear.
Now, if police or hunters see any wolves in the area they will kill them as soon as possible.
This news report has been chosen for great use of fronted adverbials!
RED IN TROUBLE!
Yesterday morning, a young girl from Cardinal Close was left stunned after a surprising experience with Mr. H.Wolf.
Red, from Cardinal Close, was shaking after her nanny was eaten alive by Mr.H.Wolf. Now, mum is reassuring her and feeding Red her favourite cookies.
Yesterday morning, Little Red just wanted to surprise her nanny and give her a bunch of fresh cakes. However, when she arrived she met a weird wolf in nanny’s clothes. Luckily, the local gardener saved her!
Later that day, a new reporter caught up with the hero. “I was just pulling out the weeds in the woods and I heard a dreadful scream, so I saved the day!” said the local gardener, happily.
Finally, if you have any extra information you should call 07744555 Thank you.
Beowulf the Brave
This work was chosen because it gave Miss Jones goose bumps!
I could see sparks from the fire flickering in the pitch black sky. I could feel the cold breeze on my skin. I was roasting delicious, white marshmallows on the fire. After, my friend ate his marshmallows, he started to feel dozy. How long would it be until sunset?
When the bright sun started to fade away, it slinked through the ghastly sky, slid through the wet willow tunnel and it dashed through the squelchy, brown mud to where my tent lay.
I could hear howling in the distance it was getting closer towards me. Was that just me or was that a real wolf? My legs froze. I was hyperventilating. IT WAS A WEREWOLF! Its teeth were as sharp as a dagger and blood was dripping from his mouth.