First I entered the haunted house and I heard the windows creaking and water dripping on the floor. Ghosts were saying “I’m going to haunt your house”. But I was soaked like an ice cube. I could hear the joker laughing, it was a terrifying laugh but I was not scared!! I thought about some food but I felt a drop of blood on my hand. It was soft and smooth. I looked up, it was a flesh eating bat!! I ran but the door was locked. I looked around the corner and guess what I saw…. a ghostly bone on the floor!!
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