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RED IN DANGER

Yesterday morning, Red discovered a wolf was in grandma’s bed snoring loudly.

Red of Fairy-Tale Cottage, was left standing horrified after finding a wolf fast asleep in Grandma’s bed, wearing her clothes, when she visited Grandma’s house, yesterday morning.

During the night of the ordeal, Red got consumed by the wolf herself. Whilst in the wolf’s stomach, Red found out that her grandma had been eaten by the wolf.

Meanwhile, a woodcutter passed by. He heard a horrendous snoring sound coming from Grandma’s house. He knew that was not how Grandma snores, so he went inside. He was astonished when he found a wolf sleeping in Grandma’s bed, so he got a pair of scissors and cut the wolf’s tummy open. Grandma and Red jumped out of the wolf’s tummy happily and they put some stones in the wolf’s stomach and hid outside. As the wolf was waking up, he felt pain and then died.

Red went to the radio reporter and she said ” It was the most horrifying experience we ever had. I saw no Grandma and a wolf wearing Grandma’s clothes and his snore was louder than a man’s snore. As a result of the ordeal,  I am scared that another wolf will return.” She said shedding a tear.

“Thankfully, Grandma is hale and hearty.” Said Red. She is pleading for any help finding someone to stop wolves terrorizing people everywhere.

 

Derrick 3M

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