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I slowly fastened the tiny bendy tent. I saw dark shadows on the tent. Outside foxes howled loudly. The blood moon became darker. When will Grendel come?

As night fell, the creature slinked across the smoky cave, zoomed across the deadly moorland and slipped through the mist.

I heard loud murmuring outside and a colossal claw brushed the plastic tent. With a frightful scream, it damaged the plastic tent. An inky black sinister shadow was in the doorway of the tent. My heart was racing, I was froze to the spot.

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Freya the Brave was the wife of Magnus the Magnificent. When Freya strode animals hid, creatures froze and people stared.

Freya the Brave was loyal and a slayer, victorious and powerful.

Freya had never been injured in her whole life! She was so strong she had never lost a battle.

by Anaiya