Dear mom and dad,
I know you’ve already received the telegraph. I just wanted to tell you for myself.
James is dead. It’s all my fault. I am drowning in my own tears, just writing makes me emotional. My guilt was eating me alive when I held him in my arms. I still wonder why it wasn’t me.
My younger brother died before me. I told him… I told him not to join the army. He would not listen.
I’m sorry.
Please love me, please forgive me.
Yours truly Edison.
Danae, a heart wrenching letter, well done!
Thank you .
What does heart wrenching mean?
This is an amazing piece of work. I like the phrase ‘ I am drowning in my own tears’ i also like the phrase ‘ My guilt was eating me alive when i held him in my arms’ i think that would probably be level 4 possibly 5.
Amazing!
Thanks level 5 is my aim.