First I entered the haunted house and I heard the windows creaking and water dripping on the floor.  Ghosts were saying “I’m going to haunt your house”.  But I was soaked like an ice cube.  I could hear the joker laughing, it was a terrifying laugh but I was not scared!!  I thought about some food but I felt a drop of blood on my hand.  It was soft and smooth.  I looked up, it was a flesh eating bat!! I ran but the door was locked.  I looked around the corner and guess what I saw…. a ghostly bone on the floor!!

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