Suddenly I crept into the haunted house  and I saw flying coats going into the sky and silky cobwebs in every corner of the room.  Slowly I saw a broken footstep and the curtains they were swishing. Slowly I could even hear Chris shouting for “help”.  Sadly I could not see him.  I could hear someone at the door but it was nobody and then came a phone call for no reason.  I felt scared and  my heart was beating faster and faster.  My hands were shaking like jelly and my knees were quaking like a giant was playing with the earth, thinking it was a ball.  Well maybe it could have been a dream or maybe it was not …  What could it be?

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