Year 5
Bearwood Primary School
Bearwood Road
Bearwood
Birmingham
B66 4HB
Thursday 14th February
Dear Staff at Bearwood Primary,
My name is Sian Dullay and I would like to propose a resonible subject; on how you should buy fairtrade hot drinks.
If you buy fairtrade products, you are confirming a decreased wadge for the workers in fairtrade countries.
More over the fact, you are guaranteed quality products, knowing you are giving a better oppotunity in life for citizens less fortunate than considerable people like youslef.
On the othger hand, non-fairtrade products are cheaper. However, my personal opinion is that a majority of people do not mind paying from 10p-50p extra.
As a result of this subject, it goes without saying, that non-fairtrade hot drinks do not have foul tastes. I’m sure you will respect this situation. In conclusion I think that buying fairtrade products are of an advantage to third world country citizens.
Yours sincerely,
Sian Dullay.
Great letter Sian very effective.
Your letter is very formal. If I was a teacher I would defiantly be persuaded. Well done.
Keep it up. 🙂
Same! If I was a general teacher I would be definitely persuaded!!
: )