Zoe’s News Report (literacy)

I wrote this at home. What do you think?
Hello and welcome to Bearwood’s  News with me Amy Hopper.

I am saddened to tell you about yesterday at the Costa Concordia  which had just set sail and had sunk at approximately 9:30.

According to the chairmen they believe that ‘Human error is to blame’,  and they certainly don’t  take responsibility for the incident and they’re  certain that it is the captains fault and not theirs. But according to the captain it is not  his fault and that the rocks weren’t on his map! But he doesn’t have any excuses for abandoning  the ship, And  there is great news to end from the Italian government- Captain Francisco (aged 52) will be in jail for the rest of his life. That’s it for today at Bearwood’s News.

From Zoe  

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8 thoughts on “Zoe’s News Report (literacy)

  1. I love your blog post Its great I like the way when you was in character. Zoe the more you do blog post the more you get better at it. Keep up the good work.

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