I wrote this story when i got home from school tonight. Please let me know what you think of it so far.

Sarah was 11 years and lived in London. She went to a school named Higgleton primary school.It was Friday and on Monday there was no school.Sarah was doodling on her front cover of her book.

“Sarah, what are you doing may I ask?” Shouted Mrs Savannah with a serious look.
“Nothing.” Replied Sarah looking around. After a while it was home time. Sarah rushed outside immediantly  like a racing car and went home.

As she walked inside her house she heard whispering. She peered inside her living room and found her mum and dad.”Hello, so what were you talking about?” She asked curiously. “Well we were deciding weather to go to Bradford or Manchester actually.” her mum  answered. “Mm..Manchester.” she rapidly said. “OK then we will go to Manchester.” Her Mum spoke with a pleasant face. After tea time Sarah went straight to bed and fell asleep. The next day they got up and packed for Manchester.Eventually everyone had packed and they were ready to go.

Finally they arrived at a hotel at 1:30 pm in the afternoon. Sarah suggested to explore Manchester and they all agreed.Whilst exploring Manchester she found an old, deserted building by a lake. Petrified, terrified,scared she nervously walked in…

Read the next part tomorrow..