Are you struggling to get to grips with your Writer’s Workshop targets?
Yes, well let us know the target that you are finding tricky and the whole of Y5 will upload suggestions of what you could write.
22 thoughts on “Taming Those Writing Targets!”
I need help in my targets.
Which is to use so as to in my writing but whenever i try i always .get it wrong,this is the sentence that i wrote.
But his enemy tricked him,so as to that day he never trusted his enemys again.
I need help in my targets.
Which is to use so as to in my writing but whenever i try i always .get it wrong,this is the sentence that i wrote.
But his enemy tricked him,so as to that day he never trusted his enemys again.
‘But his enemy tricked him so to defeat him.’ Would work Sumayyah
Me too, I need loads of pratice for so as to. It’s hard to understand how to use it.
Anisa logged onto the Y5 blog so as to read the latest post.
Would this work: Anisa got the matchsticks so as to light the candles.
Can so as to be used the same way as in order to?
Anisa got the matchsticks in order to light the candle.
Or
I went to the pantomime in order to watch Alaadin.
These are my writing targets: To use 2 worded sentences and to use ;.
This ; is same as but so it is easy to use.
Do you know what SOAP sentences are? They are similes, onamatapeioe,alitteration and p[ersonification.
E.g: The leaves were as crunchy as crips.
Whoosh!
Vivid vilots!
The trees danced in the breeze like a balarina.
You need to put the p in the brackets as well .
Let me try and use ;
– I hurried to the shop ; it was closed.
– Kimran hurried to put out the fire ; it had already spread.
Did I use ; correctly?
Anisa I think you’ve got it. Your match and candle sentence is spot on, well done.
Would this work : I splatted my enemies car with eggs so as to get my revenge on them.
Thank you, now I understand how to use them!
Let me try and use so as to.
– I went to the pantomime so as to watch aladin.
– My dog ran into the distance so as to fetch the stick.
Well done Y5, I love the way you are sharing ideas and talking about possible ways to meet your targets. I hope this post is useful to you.
Today is targret Tuesday so we will have new targets. I wander if I’m a goalscorer!
My targets are :
1) to use a 1 worded sentence.
2)To use nethertheless
Do you mean never the less?
Sometimes I get stuck with my targets.
Tell us what they are we will all help you.
I don’t know my targets,SORRY.
I went to the shops so as to buy milk.
Miss I need some help on using ‘. They are kind of hard. Can you please help me.