The lion roared, “Now my friends gather around me. I’ve got a plan”.
All the animals gathered closely towards the lion. The lion whispered the plan.
By Obaid
Well done for editing your writing to put in fantastic punctuation.
“Now my crew gather round me. I’ve got a plan,” spoke the lion slowly. All the animals gathered closely towards the lion to hear his plan.
“When my beautiful, orange tail goes up that means we are winning the battle. If my tail goes down that means we have for the first time been defeated by those ugly insects and run for your life, ” explained the lion.
Suddenly, in the bushes there was a bee listening to their plan but the suspicious bee flew away to tell his General all about their plan. The bee was very, very sneaky .When the General heard about their plan he was so furious.
By Simran
Great use of paragraphs today Simran
The Clever Monkey
Once in a scorching, windy desert lived a monkey. He lived up in a bright, green tree. He was listening to his two friends called The Cats .They came across a delicious, succulent cheese. They were arguing about who would slice the cheese.
By Mike
Great describing today Mike