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If you could perform any story for our blog. Which story would you choose?
He is funny!!
The baby is so cute and funny.
I agree with you!
This is my chapter 3 of my story.
When Narla came back to the castle she thought and thought. “ That’s it!” she shouted loudly. “I can find the Wand of Light and break all of Blade’s spells then that would make him weak and old” said Narla intelligently. Narla mounted Honica apprehensively and zoomed off along the red brick road which led to Blade’s enormous castle.
She hid behind the towering pillars of gold encrusted with rare jewels from every continent. Overwhelmed by their beauty, Narla followed their length up to the ceiling where they supported the grand blue dome. For a moment Narla forgot about her mission as she became distracted by the sunlight bouncing off every wall. Blade had the Wand of Light in his hand.
“Narla, Narla!” screamed Lidia. Narla just carried on with her mission. She leaped out from behind the gold and jewellery pillars and grabbed the Wand of Light. She said “Wand of Light, please will you make Blade old and weak. “No, no!” he yelled loudly but it was too late. Blade was weak and old so Narla didn’t have to marry Blade also her parents weren’t dead. Narla was very proud of herself and went back to Cloud Kingdom. Even though they didn’t know that she escaped, they gave Narla her skating shoes. They bought her an ice ring and she went outside and skated on it happily.
Well done Zeba. Amazing writing! What happened to the Zeba who does not like to write? I am so proud of you.
LOL!! the baby is fantastic!! 😀
i argree kofi 😀
Chapter Three
Jess’s Adventure.
Suddenly she found were the rain forest cage was. She carefully walks through the dry bumpy rock. It was starting to be dark. Finally she found safe place to sleep.
“COCK-A-DO-DO-DOO!” It was morning she first eat her buns and her ruby juice. Therefore she quickly gets ready because the animism was nearby. She carefully takes her shine golden solid and her dark black gun. Then evil Crush witch take parents saw her. When he saw her he starts making his evil laugh.
“HA! HA! HA! HA!” What are you looking loser!” He said crossly. “NO!” She gassed him. “I am the one who take your parents loser!” Oh no!” If you want your parents back I will first kill you Loser.” Never and my name is Jess not Loser.” How do you know that my parents are at the rain forest cage?” Because when I took your stupid I saw you screaming.” Okay but they not stupid.” Oh yes they are.
Jess was trying to make him forget about to kill her. He was mean to jess he calls her names and he said her parents were stupid. She really gets upset and worried but Crush was happy. She first thinks can I call him names too?” No I will be mean too.
“Okay do you want me to call you names or not?” Of course no.” So why are you calling me names?” BECAUSE!” He said crossly. “How can you ask me a silly question like that?” Silly girl. “I am not silly .I just want to know how you fill because you are annoying me.” She shouts at him and yet he gets red on his face he was very cross.
Now he was about killing Jess because she made him very cross. Jess was getting ready for the fight. She stepped a few yards backwards and cracked near an ant-hill with her eyes popping, spying at the enemy. She carefully took her sword out and tiptoed to the enemy whispering to the enemy with great passion in her voice “kill me now or l will be the first ready”.
“I am ready to fight” he answered back. They fought and fought and fought until the evil Crush died at last. Jess felt relived and final she was able to look for her parents. She found her parent in a cage with barely food to eat. She untied them and they found their way out. They had their best meal ever.
Finally, Jess and her family were heading for another adventure.
that baby is reely good
The baby has put such an effort into this story.
The baby was really funny and clever! 🙂 🙂
That baby is so cute and has madevan effort on telling the story 😉
Fabulous story , the class is very imaginative keep up the great work – Aaminah mum
Here is half my chapter of my story Rexiroar’s Revenge
Imagine, Imagine a world where mysterrious creatures and the sun always shines and the water just splashes really loud.You will always defeat an enemy that is trying to attack the world.
“Mom Dad are you home?”Asked Rexiroar
i cannot remember the rest i am so sorry