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Should chocolate be allowed in school?
Introduction
There are many arguments about chocolate in school.
For
Many children believe that chocolate must be allowed in school. However, they think that chocolate is healthy. Furthermore, many children really like chocolate.
Against
There is some healthy food to give children. Children must eat snacks because they make children healthy. Therefore we are not allowed to eat chocolate in school so this is a reason good reason why children are not allowed chocolate.
For
At lunchtime you can eat chocolate so I don’t know why we are not allowed to eat chocolate. Some teachers eat chocolate at lunch and playtime but we are the same people and should be allowed too.
Against
Chocolate is not healthy it is just yummy for children. Therfore many doctors have arguments about chocolate too because. Chocolate can make your teeth dirty and unhealthy.
Conclusion
I would like chocolate to be allowed in school because then I can eat it at playtime. That’s why I really like chocolate.
By Shammah 4D
I came to England in July 2011 and I feel happy that I am a goal scorer.
There is a lot of discussion about chocolate being allowed in school. Some children think it should be allowed in school because school diners have chocolate cake.
Why do children like chocolate so much? It is because it is so delicious, scrumptious and delectable. That’s why children like it. Also, children see teachers sneakily eating chocolate!
In addition, teachers say it is only allowed in lunch time and not at play. After looking at the different points of view I think chocolate should be allowed in school.
By Obaid
I feel fantastic that I am a Goal scorer!
There should be chocolate in school because in cereal bars there are some chocolate bits in. Think about it, if chocolate was permently band then we wouldn’t get a topic chocolate or even get to make one. The teachers are allowed chocolate in school however that is not fare for us children. In the school we need chocolate. CHOCOLATE LASTS AND FRUIT GOES MOULDY un like chocolate.
By Haven
I think it is excellent that I am a goal scorer.
My goal scoring!
This is my sentence that got me my goal scorer.
Furthermore the teachers have been sneakily bringing in chocolate items so most children get jealous.
The people that agree with this idea such as students in my school claim that chocolate should be allowed in school because they believe that it is a tasty, luscious treat to have during breaktime. They also think that because they have it at home it fine to have what they want when they go to school.
I feel really happy that I am writing well and that I am achieving my targets!
Should Chocolate be allowed in school?
Introduction
There is a lot of discussion about chocolate being allowed in school.
I agree with chocolate in school because our pupils have worked hard for a well known treat.
However, I don’t agree because if the chocolate invasion starts someone like Obaid might get very ill because he is allergic to nuts. Nuts are in many chocolate bars. Some snacks like flapjacks have a small trace of chocolate and nuts but you could keep away from Obaid.
If you bring a chocolate bar into school you would be buying a chocolate bar instead of fruit. This is a bad thing because the children could get ill. Children need to eat 5 a day to be healthy.
My final conclusion is that you should be allowed to eat chocolate in school.
By Mike
I feel brilliant about being a goal scorer because I like having my work published on the blog.
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Should chocolate be allowed in school?
Introduction
There are many arguments about chocolate in school.
For
Many children believe that chocolate must be allowed in school. However, they think that chocolate is healthy. Furthermore, many children really like chocolate.
Against
There is some healthy food to give children. Children must eat snacks because they make children healthy. Therefore we are not allowed to eat chocolate in school so this is a reason good reason why children are not allowed chocolate.
For
At lunchtime you can eat chocolate so I don’t know why we are not allowed to eat chocolate. Some teachers eat chocolate at lunch and playtime but we are the same people and should be allowed too.
Against
Chocolate is not healthy it is just yummy for children. Therfore many doctors have arguments about chocolate too because. Chocolate can make your teeth dirty and unhealthy.
Conclusion
I would like chocolate to be allowed in school because then I can eat it at playtime. That’s why I really like chocolate.
By Shammah 4D
I came to England in July 2011 and I feel happy that I am a goal scorer.
Should chocolate be allowed in school?
There is a lot of discussion about chocolate being allowed in school. Some children think it should be allowed in school because school diners have chocolate cake.
Why do children like chocolate so much? It is because it is so delicious, scrumptious and delectable. That’s why children like it. Also, children see teachers sneakily eating chocolate!
In addition, teachers say it is only allowed in lunch time and not at play. After looking at the different points of view I think chocolate should be allowed in school.
By Obaid
I feel fantastic that I am a Goal scorer!
There should be chocolate in school because in cereal bars there are some chocolate bits in. Think about it, if chocolate was permently band then we wouldn’t get a topic chocolate or even get to make one. The teachers are allowed chocolate in school however that is not fare for us children. In the school we need chocolate. CHOCOLATE LASTS AND FRUIT GOES MOULDY un like chocolate.
By Haven
I think it is excellent that I am a goal scorer.
My goal scoring!
This is my sentence that got me my goal scorer.
Furthermore the teachers have been sneakily bringing in chocolate items so most children get jealous.
By Sian
This was my goal scoring sentence.
Also a chocolate lasts longer than a piece of fruit.
By Shaynie
The people that agree with this idea such as students in my school claim that chocolate should be allowed in school because they believe that it is a tasty, luscious treat to have during breaktime. They also think that because they have it at home it fine to have what they want when they go to school.
I feel really happy that I am writing well and that I am achieving my targets!
by Aneesha
Should Chocolate be allowed in school?
Introduction
There is a lot of discussion about chocolate being allowed in school.
I agree with chocolate in school because our pupils have worked hard for a well known treat.
However, I don’t agree because if the chocolate invasion starts someone like Obaid might get very ill because he is allergic to nuts. Nuts are in many chocolate bars. Some snacks like flapjacks have a small trace of chocolate and nuts but you could keep away from Obaid.
If you bring a chocolate bar into school you would be buying a chocolate bar instead of fruit. This is a bad thing because the children could get ill. Children need to eat 5 a day to be healthy.
My final conclusion is that you should be allowed to eat chocolate in school.
By Mike
I feel brilliant about being a goal scorer because I like having my work published on the blog.
Well done! Your writing was full of disprtion.
In our shcool we are only allowed chocolate in our lunch boxes.