Today we explored our school to write our own similes and metaphors for our poems about schools. It was quite tricky at first but we had some brilliant ideas. We used our senses to describe
Year 4 can we all share our ideas on the Blog so we can steal from each other? [slideshow]
Similes, personification and Metaphors
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The chattering travels down the corridors like echoes.
The air breathes through school making our bones icy cold.
The vibrant mushrooms call us to bounce on them.
The corridors twist like a train on a track.
The computers hum like busy bees.
The instruments call us to play them in the hall.
by Sian
Ooooo! These are going to be good I bet!
Hello! We started to go round our school to look for things to make similes and metaphors for, I’ll give and example of a simile then a metaphor. (Not at school) ‘My DS was like double the size of a mouse’s body!’ ‘My tea spoons are 10 flys without wings’ you might go :S at metaphor if you were a child that never learnt it!!! (Most teachers obviously know it)
I think that when we went round the school looking for similes and metaphores are really going to help me remember plus there in are classroom right on the wall where everyone can see it!
The letter was as light as a feather.
Here is a similie:
The floor boards are creaky as birds chirping in the air.
The playground is a cold igloo.
Colourful rainbow lunchboxes make my mouth water.
Shaynie, you have made my stomach rumble!
Curious doorways shout keep out
The car was as loud as a hungry roaring lion.
The similes were so fun to write so here’s an example:
The throne was as shiney as the crystal clear water.
I enjoyed It because I was able to make similes and metaphors of things in the school, I was in a group so more was on the paper. I was the first one to think of a metaphor when my group swaped with the other group that were in the class. But I let Zuzzana say it out load, my metaphor was, ‘Diplodocus’s tail was a mazzive rope’
The gust of air drifts past us.
Wow! A great metaphor Fabio!
Similes were so fun. I wrote one:
Class rooms enjoying their freedom from the children.
Wow! Simran I love this metaphor!
I liked it when we went on our hunt because I got to use my senses (see, hear).
The hall is cold like an igloo.
When the school is working everyone is quiet as a mouse.
Nathan flies like an angel.
Chetan sings like an angel.
The piano is as calming as a tropical island.
The floorboards are as creaky as a haunted house.
The hall is as freezing as a pile of snow.
The bench is as heavy as a massive table.
The classroom is as quiet as a mouse.
The playground is as noisy as a squawking bird.
The cupboard was crowded like a busy bus stop.
The creaky floorboards were as squeaky as a mouse.
The beautiful art work was as gorgeous as a red rose.
As echoey as an deep, dark cave!
The seat is as hard as a rock.
The stairs are as tiring as a hill.
Near 6M’s door it was echoey as a cave.
The wooden bench is as high as a mountain!
I love the ideas of noise travelling down the corridors like an echo in a cave! I am stealing this!
The playground was a riot. Children running everywhere.
The hall is as cold as an igloo.
The drum was as loud as thunder.
The light is as blinding as the sun.
The playground bell is as heavy as a ton of bricks.
The slam of the playground door is as loud as a dinosaur’s roar.
The wind is as gusty as a tornado.
The whole school is a roundabout .
The hall is as creaky as an 18th century house.
The floor boards are creaky like a haunted house in the hall.
At lunch time it is as ear splitting as a stampede.
The school bell is as heavy as a pile of bricks.
The stairs are as tiring as climbing a mountain.
The floor boards croak like an old frog.
In the evening, the playground is as calm and relaxing as a tweeting bird.
The hall is as cold as an igloo.
The playground is a colourful as a rainbow.
The stairs are a huge mountain.
The floor boards were as creaky as a ghostly door.
The room was as crammed as a busy bus stop.
The hall was as cold as the North Pole.
The school is as cosy as a cushion.
The wall boards are as bright as the sun.
The bell is as loud as a playground full of children.
Everybody is rushing to school as rapid as a car.
Calthorpe Haven is like a small forest.
The swimming pool can be as cold as an iceberg.
The school, at night, is as creepy as a haunted house.
At home time I feel as free as a bird.
The school is like a roundabout.
The floor is as creaky as an 18th century house.
The bell is as loud as Big Ben ringing.
The lights are as blinding as the sun.
The hall is a cave because of the eco.
The piano plays music as sweet as a lollipop.
The stairs are as tiring as climbing a mountain.
The school at break time is as loud as a an orchestra.
Our environment at Calthorpe Haven is like a forest.
During lessons, the school is as quiet as a mouse.
The break time bell was as heavy as a brick.
The floor is as creaky as an 18th century house.
The hall’s echo is as if you are in a cave.
A drums bang is as loud as a dinosaur’s stomp.
In lessons the school is as quiet as a mouse.
The bell is as heavy as a computer screen.
The school is as full as a jls concert.
The hall is as cold as an igloo.
The school is like a roundabout
The drum is as loud as thunder.
If you play the piano it will be as sweet as a little girl singing.
The bell is as loud as big Ben.
The floor in the hall is creaky like an 18th century house.
The jls one is a similes and a metaphor.
Excellent similes and metaphors Year 4! Remember to steal these for our poems tomorrow.
I love doing similes and metaphores and I`ve learnt a new way how to spell similies smile with an I it really is a fabulous way of spelling similes!
A persification Yasir.
My Snoopy toy hugged me.ss
Bearwood locks like a nice and beatyfull school.
You spelt beautiful and looks wrong.
The house was laughing
i think that it was fun when we got to add the motor to the wires