In Literacy today it was time to create pur imaginary worlds for our stories. First we used google to find pictures of wodds, jungles, trees and other places. Then we used the laptops and sumopaint.com to make the pictures look like Pandora. We changed the photos. You could make them brighter and change the colours so the pictures looked multicoloured and very peculiar!
Some peole added in aliens and monsters.
It was really fun and I am going to try sumopaint at home.
Now we are writing to describe our Pandpora. We will add the pictures and our writing to the blog later.
We had added our writing as comments below. Take a look!
These are great changes you have made. I wish my camera would take pictures like these!
it’s not a camera its on sumopaint.com isn’t it
a faby website!?!?!
I agree darshana and jfb57 i would love a carmera to take pictures like these however it’s not a carmera 🙁 it’s on Sumo paint and it’s Fandabydozo (fablouse)
i like those pictures 🙂
I don’t like those pictures- i love those pictures! They look like 4m are so talented
Perplexed, confused, bewildered I rubbed my blurry eyes and to my attention I could see towering bright trees. I could feel the breeze on my soft skin and I could see vivid orange trees. Closer to my inspection I heard a little soft sound what was it ? Just then I turned around I could see a very peculiar thing it was a rabbit hanging on tree. It was a very peculiar place.
By Shawon and karolina
Wow! shawon and Karloina I love some of the words you’ve used in your writing, well done.
Yeh i agree mya
Yes mya I agree to
I like the wow words that you have used. I like how you described pandora. Next time you could describe how you felt on pandora
Shawon and karolina I think you tried really hard. I like you openers e.g Closer to my inspection. I liked your 3ed sentence e.g Perplexed, confused, bewildered I rubbed my blurry eyes and to my attention I could see towering bright trees. I also like the word vivid.
Wish: Use generalising words.
Zara
star:i like your wow words
star:i like your word peculier
wish: i can not think about nothing yours is good all ready
Well done, I like the word vivid and that you have used a time connctive but you could have used some connectives.
i liked how you used bewildered instead of confused
and vivid as beautiful.
As I toke my surrounding and I could hear lots of strange noise coming though the trees and then there was a BANG!! I thought what was that and when I looked back and I could see a big man with wing 3 headed man and then I stared to run…… The trees braches where hitting my face as I was running though the dark blue forest and the trees where glowing blue. Never before I had saw a tree glowing in the forest I cept on running like lighting but that creature never ran out of breath and Finlay I had lost that creature raaaa!! I thought that creature will not ever leave me alone….
Wish:I think you could of used more wow words. Use the wow word wall to help you next time or a thesuras
Star:I liked the way you described the branches hitting you on your face .
star: i love when your putting in suspence
wish: check you work makes sence
Star: I love yor amazing description.
Wish: Use some better wow words.
(here is my second part of story carried on)
i my hole entire life as i stared to run again after 2 minutes i was still running and then i slipped and fall into a hole full of slimy,slithry leafs as the creature run past above me i slowly peeked up and finely after that long run i was left alone there. But when i got out i still toke in my surroundings because maybe there was anther creature but there was no creature so I stared to slowly walk because I was tired because I had run to much from a distus I could a bliding when I reached the bilding there was a machine when sat in it I had went the real world …………
( i had rote this at home by dalip)
Wearily, I blinked my blurry eyes. Where am I? Never before have I been to such a peculiar place. Everything here has mesmeric, vibrant and stunning trees, plants and animals. I am really perplexed. This is really bazaar. All I could here was a deafening screech. I could smell a very delectable fruit. It was like I was hypnotized. Just then I saw the exquisite fruit I had a massive bite out of it was horrible I am telling you now never ever try fruits from weird planets.
By Harjun and Maviesh
I like the words perplexed hypnotized delectable
🙂 🙂 🙂
As I woke up I blinked my eyes several times then I realised I was not at home not even on earth. There were massive tree and it was glowing. Then I heard someone breathing heavily so I turned around to see who it was… Who was that I had no idea so I turned around and saw a 4 headed monster . Never before have I seen something like that before!
Wearily, I woke up seeing a strange world front of me. I was in something called ventus. I was stuck in a cage. Suddenly some one came and said “hello my friend” I could not see him but I did hear him he was hiding. Strangly I felt something I shouted because I saw my self as a bird. The man was still hiding but not for long. He appearde in front of me. He had a dark, gloomy eyes and also a gold, shining magic key he opened the cage for me.
By usman
Pandora on planet Zanc description.
Blinking my bleary eyes I took in my bizarre, unusual surroundings. I glared around wondering where I was perplexed, bewildered and baffled. Strangely I realized I was surrounded by significant, multi -coloured trees as tall as a building. Never before have I seen a land where there were bright pink and violet trees! Bismah and Mya
Bismah and mya you tried really hard. Star: I like your wow words
Wish: Use more connectives
THAT WAS FABLOUS 🙂 🙂 🙂
Star- I really like your never before senteance when I read that it made me blow away well done
Wish- I also agree with Zara you could use a lot more connectives but you are very good a writing!!! 🙂
Tiered, I blinked my blurry eyes and tried to match my surroundings. Where am I? Am I even on earth? And I don’t even know where am I because every thing is very unusual I’ am not been to this sort of planet or country before in my hole life so I tip toed in through my surroundings and never before have seen trees that are like10elephants on top of each other. And black and blue striped plant s with plants the size of 250 ants on top of each other which are the colure purple.
By Jaspreet and Hammaad
Jaspreet and hammad I enjoyed reading your story
Wearily, I blinked my weak, blurry eyes and took in my surroundings. I found myself in a strange land it didn’t even seem like a land. Where was I? The land was peculiar and bizarre. Perplexed, discombobulated, mystified I looked around and I glared around to be found in a world of multicolored trees. (You couldn’t even believe all the colors there was pink, red, violent, green and many more)
Suddenly, I heard a noise it echoed through the deserted, undisturbed forest.
Usually I am courageous as ever but today I was shivering like a jelly on a plate. I was quite as ever.
By Zara & Max
I really like this ,max and zara it is fantastic
🙂
Thank you
Wearily, I blinked my weak, blurry eyes and took in my surroundings. I found myself in a strange land it didn’t even seem like a land. Where was I? 😀 The land was peculiar and bizarre. Perplexed, discombobulated, mystified I looked around and I glared around to be found in a world of multicolored trees. 🙁 🙁 🙁 (You couldn’t even believe all the colors there was pink, red, violent, green and many more) 😉
Suddenly, I heard a noise it echoed through the deserted, undisturbed forest. 🙂 🙂 🙂 😮 😮 😮
Usually I am courageous as ever but today I was shivering like a jelly on a plate. 🙂 🙂 🙂
This is what I added at home:
I was quite as ever and a single peep didun’t come out of me. It was eerie. It was all colorful an i didunt know where to go. I could see rabbits hanging from trees. Have you ever been in a place like this? This was strange. There were some really strange , bizzare plants. Who had created this world. I had to explore. I was shivering like jelly. And can you belive it I had goose bumps. 🙂 🙂 🙂 😉 😉 😉 😀 😀 😀 😛 :p :p :p
I hope you enjoy reading my story.
Wearily, I strolled across the rocky floor I was petrified because I could feel fright and goose pumps racing up my arms. Have you ever had that feeling that you are being watched? When I was walking through Pandora I had that feeling. As I was walking I could see monstrous bright green and blue trees and a sparkly red floor. The sky was spying on me. It looked normal like any other sky would except the sun was purple. Also the trees and the floor looked very peculiar. The floor looked as if it was made of liquid and you could fall in but when I nervously stepped on the path is was hard but slippery. Never before have had I seen such a dazzling,weird place. I was thinking. Have I been abducted by aliens and then been dropped back to a different planet…?
I really like your words you tried really hard 🙂 🙂 🙂 😉 😉
Thank you Zara I read yours and you had some really good words!!!
Wearily, I opened my eye and rubbed them slowly. I saw leaves and branches in my room. I smelled strawberries on trees where was the smell coming from ? I looked out of my window and I was in Pandora. I rushed outside and saw odd creatures. I saw sheep hanging on trees.
From Sabina and Noorulain
I loved the word wearily but instead oy using the word smelled you could use spice.
Wearily, I opened my eye and rubbed them slowly. I saw leaves and branches in my room. I smelled strawberries on trees where was the smell coming from ? I looked out of my window and I was in Pandora. I rushed outside and saw odd creatures. I saw sheep handing on trees.
From Sabina and Noorulain
Perplexed, confounded, shocked my heart noticed that I was in an unfamiliar place.
Never before have I seen towering trees that glow ruby red, just then I knew that I wasn’t on earth any more, I was in a peculiar, strange world.
Breathing heavily, I walked around. After a while I’ve seen a bizarre old house that was covered with metal, it was guarded by the greatest technology robots. Eventually I annihilated all of the technology robots and I quickly rushed inside the house as fast as lightning making sure no one saw me…
When I got into the house I’ve seen a bright light, the more I looked at the light the brighter it got, so I took the light. Then I went into the secret cave that was under the house, just then I’ve seen a door that led me to my world…
By Darshana& Rayan.
I like these pictures.
Yeah kamal the pictures are great
Sleepily I blinked my crusty eyes and got out of my bed like a machine for the first time in 100 years. I had left the robotic, futuristic lab and had come to Pandora.
My arms and legs feel like jelly and I can hardly move them because they are as heavy as weights.
Suddenly I realize that this is not like earth at all. It was a different planet. In front of me I saw grass as blue as the sea, the sky looked like the sand that I had seen on holiday in Mexico. The sand was a golden shimmering colour with bright green clouds that hovered like space ships above me. Suddenly I heard a high pitched sound that made me tremble with fear like a kitten hiding from a dog. I ducked down behind my space ship as an enormous shadow loomed over me. By Alyana
I like the word even thoug.
You need to say it before you write it Sabina
i liked how you used an ly’ sleepily at the beggining… and how you described the lab as futuristic and robotic also how you described your imaginary world.
” It was a different planet. In front of me I saw grass as blue as the sea, the sky looked like the sand that I had seen on holiday in Mexico. The sand was a golden shimmering colour with bright green clouds that hovered like space ships above me.”
and you could rely describe ”it was a different planet” you could of wrote i ened up into a rarder peculiar and unfamilier planet…
I agree
I woke up and I wanted to go to sleep much longer. When I woke up I saw leaves all over my room and I could smell apples. and I saw humongous purple – pinky trees and bushes they were I quickly looked out my window Sluggishly I woke up even though I glowing. I ran outside and I was in Pandora where in the world was I ? I saw strange creatures. Most of the creatures looked like monkeys and I also saw cows hanging on trees. I was frightened I wanted to go home.
By Sana and Aiza
I really like you ly words e.g Sluggishly , quickly
I like your question where in the world was I ?
Great
Wearily I blinked my bloodshot eyes and I was trying to think where I was. “Where am I?” I said to myself. My long, strong feet were asleep so I leaned on something. What was it? Who was it? It ran away. Luckily I saw its face but it was a skulls face and a different creature’s face with bulls’ horns. What is this planet? I saw a cave. Maybe the thing was in there. It was echoic and pitch black. Where was I …
By Udeshpal Mann
i like your photo karolina and shawon
I liked Harjun’s and Maviesh’s because they used peculiar,mesmeric,vibrant and stunning also because you used good openers. You need to write more.
Suddenly I opened my blood shot eyes and I saw a bright bluer gloomy tree and I saw a different weird world . It was rely strange. I Colden believe my eyes. And I saw creatures crawling every were. And bright green grass .and it was very very calm never before I slowly got up I was alone in a massive colorful jungle. I throat I was dreaming this was the weird day of my life. and I smelled red bright strawberries.
*I like your starter because it tells you how many times he blinked
(wish)you read after you write and you put a Question mark after a Question
I loved reading all the storys it was fantastic. I enjoyed reading it. I loved writting the storys.
Sana I agree writing the storys was so fun.
Sumopaint is a fantastic website I love the pictures. Everybody has tried there best.
I agree with you Zara. 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂
yes zara i agree with you and when miss told us that wedsite i went home and made a lot of photos and i have use that wedsite (sumopaint.com) about at least 30 times and my mum and dad had a go to make a photo but they made my photo so on sumopaint.com that is relly a best,fab,fantastic and cool web site i have made 10 phots in this week………
me to noorulain i agree to!!!!!!:) :): ) 🙂
i enjoyed reading your work rayan and darshana!!!!!!!!!
Me to Aiza I really like your 3ed sentce.
i understand you darshana!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
me too hammaad there great pictures!!
cool!!!!!!!!! karolina and shawon i really enjyoed reading your fabulous work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I agree Kamal.
Wow Max and Zara.
wow max and zara cool words i like i like a lot
thank you 🙂 🙂
wow joshua and alyan you have worked hard
emiliana and raees i think you should say your sentence before you write it!!!!!! but i enjoyed reading it well done emiliana and raees
These look so bright and fab. I think everyone tryed there best.
yes karolna every one worked of there socks and they all made fablouse,amazing,outstading phots and they did remeber a lot about what and what miss martindale told it was a bit hard to rember when i got stuck what to do i asked shannon and you to do something on sumopait.com and then we all had made our phots and they looked all fantasit 🙂 😉 🙁 😐
all the pictures were mind -blowing. I think all the class are artest.
the pictures look very good together.
people all around the earth will like our blog so much
WOW! this is amazing i like all of them
WOW! this is amazing i like all of them 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂
i hope so sana they will maybe!!!!!!!!!!
I am happy. 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂
i like the paint on your pic
Me to sana I am happy to lot