Ben and the Time machine

My favourite chapter is chapter one because it was funny and you get to meet the different characters.

This is the start of my story. What do you think?

Sat in the corner a shy boy called Ben. He was 7 years old. He was 2B’s classroom.  He was a boy. He was dressed all in red like a tomato. He was  very, very naughty  in class.


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