Slowly, I stepped into my suberb magic mirror as I was brushing my lovely, long brown hair. I was on an Incredible Island! I could see the sparkly, crystal-clear and blue sea. The breezy wind was blowing slowly. Suddenly, I stopped quickly because something caught my eye…
It was a dolphin that was so beautiful. The dolphin’s name was Seaweed. I could hear Seaweed squeaking loudly. I could feel the rough palm trees that were blowing in the breezy wind. I felt so relaxed because it was so peaceful.(Except for Seaweed squeaking!)
Then I stepped out of my magic mirror. I was so happy that I was back home.
By: Serena
What a fantastic multi sensory setting. it is really atmospheric.
Mrs H
We liked your story because it is full of description. We also liked your picture!!:) 😉
A very good multi sensory story. I would love to live on a island!
WOW! serena you used lots of wow words when you done the incredble island i liked the word you used breezy and you used lots of vcop in there i strongly agree serena you done great work.
Super serena you used lots of vcop when you were doing all about the incredible island and I strongly agree that your work is great.
iyka
Thank you everybody for your lovley comments! 🙂 This was what I did in literacy a few weeks ago.
Serena