The Island is peaceful and the sun was bright. The tree was sparkling. The sun was boiling and the beach was colourful. The water was as cold as snow and the trees were waving.
The Island is peaceful and the sun was bright. The tree was sparkling. The sun was boiling and the beach was colourful. The water was as cold as snow and the trees were waving.
It was fun doing this 😉
I still think these sentences could use some up levelling and definitely checking,as the third sentence does not make sense. Instead of always using the when your starting a sentences you could use a conjunction. Maybe the class could help you with that Miss Gaze?