Autumn Poems

Can you think of any similes, metaphors and personification to describe autumn? Use all your senses to describe what you see, hear, touch, smell and taste.

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24 thoughts on “Autumn Poems

  1. That sound interesting, here’s a simile that I’ve wrote about Autumn:
    As the crispy, crumpled leaves fell onto the heap of twigs my chilly feet crunched in the nature.

  2. Hello Mya- Lovely to hear from you. How are you getting on at your new school? Be careful- check your comment. Have you used a simile? Remember a simile compares two things to show how they are alike e.g. my feet were as chilly as ice or I was as brave like a bear.

    • It was:

      It was so peaceful that I heard the birds sing like a quior of angels.

      It was so still that I sensed a bare tree on the other side of the field
      shivering like people who forgot there coats.

      It was so hushed that I reconsed the sun smile it glorious smile.

      It was so quiet that I heard the leaves crunch like a crisp bag.

      It was so foggy that I felt the winds breeze touch my face.

  3. the leave look like they are brown and crunchy like cornflakes falling of the tree and it’s early autumn because some tree’s are still green

    • Why don’t you do it like this as I watched the brown, crunchy leaves falling with a sound of corn flakes braking while they fell down like snow I reconside some of them had a glorious smile that warmed me up like burning heaters or a boiling water hot bottel ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ™‚ :p ๐Ÿ˜ฎ ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ™

      • Sorry that dosen’t make sense ethier
        Why don’t you do it like this :
        As i watched the crunchy brown leaves fall down I heard there cry as they cracked like eggs making a sound of cornflakes braking.
        Reconising that some of them had a glum face which made me feel downhearted. :(. There do you like it ? ๐Ÿ˜€

  4. I agree karoloina these are fab If they where cakes it would ate them all ๐Ÿ˜› (sorry ingore me i’m just being greedy ๐Ÿ™ LOL ๐Ÿ˜€ )
    heres a smilie as sweet as a cake

  5. Here is a autumn similie:

    The bark of the tree was wrinkly as my gran,
    The leaves were as red as blood,
    The trees danced through the trees,
    The wind howled like a angry wolf,

  6. you have put all the wilf you have used clafs stage directions your pantomime is really amazing gautam and awais.

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