I have chosen Henrik to be goal scorer of the week because he has used CLAFS to write his explanation. Well done! Keep on focusing on your writing targets.
I am late for school because I had this party it was my birthday. It was on for three hours. It finished at ten o’clock. That made me late for school this week. Then I couldn’t sleep because all of that chocolate cake and candy which made me jump around like crazy. I couldn’t get to sleep in till two am in the morning. It was my 8th birthday. It took me ten minutes to eat my breakfast. When I got dressed it took me five minutes. When I got on the bus it broke down so I had to walk for an hour. Finally, I got to school and I was really tired. That’s why I am late for school.