Last week, we started to write our imaginary stories. Our goal scorer was Kabir.
Have you ever been to an imaginary world?
Have you ever seen a dragon breathe fire?
Have you ever been to Pandora?
This is the story about that place.
I was in my boring basic skills lesson learning nouns when suddenly my pencil started to wobble. I picked it up and it dragged me into the lead. The lead took my on a ride which was like a water ride. I swayed from side to side whilst I was on the ride. The ride was soon over.
I got out of the pencil and was placed into an unknown world.
What done you think of his openning?
A brilliant story opener, Kabir, well done! I liked your alliteration about basic skills but I know you don’t really mean it.
I liked your alitaration kabir keep it up!