Suddenly, my pencil started to blink while I was writing in my writing book. I poked the eye and BOOM! I was on another planet, the one from my story.
I woke up and I saw a waterfall that was as clear as a completely rare diamond. The bottom of the water full was as soft as a huge cloud. The trees were as red as fire. I could hear the birds cheeping like high notes on a piano. I felt confused because I didn’t know where I was.
Kaylan
Wow! Kaylan, this is an amazing piece of writing you should be very proud of your descriptions.
Wow! Kaylan, this is an amazing piece of writing you should be very proud of your descriptions.I think miss looked in the right book.