Player of the match and Goal scorers 13.03.2012

Congratulations to this week’s goal scorers. You have been chosen because you have used words and phrases to really describe a special moment in your life. Take a look at the writing. What ideas can you steal and put into your writing? 

Goal Scorers:

Apprehensive and excited, everybody could not wait for the new dog to arrive. Mustafaa.

 

Furthermore we have lots of fun because we have fireworks and lots of food. Lina

 

I had triple chocolate cake with a smooth, delicious topping inside with a ruby strawberry on top. Justin.

 

 

 

Lights, Camera, Action!

Here are some short films for you to think about.

Can you post your ideas about the setting, mood, characters, camera angles and storyline.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qidbQjEuRMI

 

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UNZKKoy4US0

 

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=omk6TAxJYOg

 

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vS2fRUP8zJ8&feature=related

Player of the match and Goal Scorers 28.02.2012

Well done to our goal scorers this week. You have carefully thought about the words and phrases you have used to explain and describe what happened in the short film ‘Dangle.’

What words have they used which are impressive?

Goal scorers’

Meharpal

Apprehensive, I pulled it and the whole wide world went dark.

 

Nabeel

It came down like a flash of lightning.

 

Navdeep

The rope fell down consequently I ran away.

Player of the match

Dawud

Firstly the man saw a rope. Next the man pulled it hard and then the sky turned to night-time. Then he pulled it again and the sky went to the morning, then he kept on pulling it. After the rope went down the man was shocked. Later the man went home also he told his brother what had happened. Then he went back and he saw a ruby, red rope. Then he was happy.