Congratulations to this week’s goal scorers. You have been chosen because you have used words and phrases to really describe a special moment in your life. Take a look at the writing. What ideas can you steal and put into your writing?
Goal Scorers:
Apprehensive and excited, everybody could not wait for the new dog to arrive. Mustafaa.
Furthermore we have lots of fun because we have fireworks and lots of food. Lina
I had triple chocolate cake with a smooth, delicious topping inside with a ruby strawberry on top. Justin.
Krim!
Animated, I suddenly woke up in a small, beautiful room in the hotel in Ukraine at Krim. My grandma, brother me and and all the rest, went down stairs to eat. As we were eating, I was also thinking about going to the sea to swim now, but if we were at the sea right now we would not be able to have our dinner.
When we finished all our dinner, we got every thing ready, jumped into the car and drove off to the sea.
When we arrived we got out of the car then went off. While I was walking on the golden sand, my feet were burning, because the sand boiling. So instead of walking, I had to run as fast as possible, to get under an unbrella where the dazzling sand is is much cooler.
We all put out everything we needed to keep us away from the sun, and excitedly, went into the crystal, glistenning sea. We all had brilliant fun and this is what we did: we went diving to sea whats under water, my great, grand father went hunting for silky, smooth fish that swam zooming under the water and at last but not least, me and my brother had a swimming race to see who wins and… I won!