This week we have chosen this piece of work for great use of fronted adverbials.
RED IN DANGER
On Thursday, Red went to Grandma’s cottage and was distressed to find a wolf in Grandma’s bed, with Grandma’s clothes on.
Little Red Riding Hood from Fairy tale Village, was left frozen in fear after her Grandma was nowhere to be found.
During the ordeal, Red was also eaten by the wolf.
This evening, Red spoke to one of our reporters, “It was the most terrifying thing I have ever experienced. I hope the wolf never comes back!” Red said crying in fear.
Now, if police or hunters see any wolves in the area they will kill them as soon as possible.
Ethan 3M
Wow brilliant! Really enjoyed reading, well done Ethan awesome piece of work.
Mom
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Ethan, excellent work. I am so proud of how well you are doing.