My favourite part is when the teacher finds Star Robot.

 Chapter 4

Star Robot sprinted towards  the door and the  time machine went   ping! He saw people walking upside down. He had wings and red eyes and sharp teeth. He zoomed up in the sky and went home. He felt tired because he was running fast and he had a good morning.  He was glad to be back home  and  he went to sleep. Good night, sleep tight.                                                                                                                

My  favourite part was when he went home.

Bradom strode towards the door of  time  machine and it went ZAP!  He saw yellow eyes with wings and it was a robot. He looked very angry, also cross. Then he went back home. He felt excited  because he had a lovely trip!

My favourite  part was when the teacher said “you can make a time machine”.

Also they spied a chair. So they coloured it green to make it like the grass.Then they decorated  it with a clock , chain and a magic wand. Whoosh. But suddenly they went to the future.

My favourite  part  was chapter 3 because Star Boy and his friend Max  stepped in the time machine.

It went to  3020  and everyone was nice . The next day a teacher was being horrible  because she tried to press channel 51 on Star Boy  and Max to make them write really fast.  But they moved and suddenly…

I liked writing my story!

My favourite part  of  the story is  chapter  3   because  Jone  was  in  his  time machine.

Jone went on  his   time macine. He was  happy to go on is  time  machine.  The  time  machine  was colourful  like  gold  and  different  colours. He sat   on  the  time  machine.  He  had  keys   for the  time  machine   and  the  time  machine  had an engine.

The teacher scared  us.  She was  a bad teacher.

My favourite part was chapter 1 because billy was going to make a brilliant time machine.

One day there was this boy called Billy. He was on time out. He said “I am  bored” so his friend came. He was wearing brown school clothes. He was sitting on the floor. Miss said “you can buy a red nose”. STOMP. He had enough money when he came in. Miss said “we are going to a new class room”  and it was an enormous and huge classroom.

My favourite chapter is chapter 3 because he meets an ugly teacher.                          

Josh was petrified because  he could not get  the time machine to work because he needed help. He could not stick the part together so they worked together to build a time machine… he was in2014!!!!!!!!!  “We are in the classroom in the future dude!!”

There was an ugly teacher behind him.  He was tall and he had sharp teeth as a knife and no hair and red hands.  “He is not are teacher and we are in 2014. We need to get out of here,” said Josh.

My favourite part was chapter 2 because he made a time machine.

Rozor had a brillant idea to make a brillant time machine with the stinky and rusty bin. He also had his phone with him and he said “how did this get in here?” Then  his friend Robot Fierce made an amazing and fantastic, also mavellous security door and Rozor put his phone on the door.

My favourite part was chapter 3 because John got into the time machine.

John got  in  the  time machine. John sat  in the chair and it was flying by itself.  The  door cracked open with a creak.

My favourite   chapter    was    chapter 2  because he made a time machine.

The teacher gave  us   free choice.   Kool   was    feeling     excited     because    he could make a  time machine.  He   got a  big bin and put a clock on  it.  Kool put lots of  buttons on.