Have a go at writing a 2 pair sentence here. Who can write the most impressive sentence? If
you don’t know what on is, here are some examples.

Vexed and infuriated,bad-tempered and annoyed, steam shot out of my ears!

Exhausted and fatigued, wearied and shattered, sweat cascaded down my forehead.

Focused and motivated, interested and engrossed the children listened carefully to the
teacher.

Anxious and worried, tensed and scared I shivered like a sheep with no wool.

Humiliated embarrassed, mortified and discomforted my face turned read as a tomatoe!

Confused and perplexed, baffled and puzzled I scratched my head as I tried to solve the maths
problem.

Can you solve this?

By Sofina 4P

On Wednesday  the 9^th of november 4P and the 4D we went to Cadbury world  first we listened to a presentation from a man named Simon he told us about the head of the aztecs his name was Montezuma and that the name chocolate comes from spain because they call it chocolate but they ponounce it differently.

Jada from 4D and Jaiden from 4P got chose to dress up in some clothes to demonstrate what it meant. Jaiden was a aztec and Jada was a housewife at home she wore a long white dress and she had to cook and clean where as Jaiden was a emporor and we called him… ” Emporor Jaiden” then we bowed at him. We were aloud to ask any questions that we wanted and this boy from 4D asked “When are we going to have the samples?”

Then we went to see the movies we sat on a bench. Unexpectedly smoke came out from the seats furthermore the seats ribrated then there was a collasal rosting drum then the beans got crumbled. We wachted a nother movie where there was a statue and John Cadburys face was on the top talking. John Cadburys shop was next to his father’s Richard Cadbury.

Then we went to a exabition it was so realisitic it was all about Montezuma and about chocolate the following day the whole year group got to write our names in chocolate I wrote mine joined up then we got  a chocolate sample it was sensational.We had lunch then we  went to the  shop it looked phenominal.

Then we found out about dairy milk it was just normal horrid chocolate with out milk  then their secutary brought milk and they said ” dairy milk a glass full of half fun . We also found about Cadbury’s and why the color is purple it is purple because purple means royalty.We also went on a ride in a car where the season’s changed  asnd they took photograph’s when it ended I wanted to go back on the ride again.

The exprience was amazing also we ate lots of chocolate.

The boy who never was,

cannot see his feet can not see his legs.

You can never see him,

when he nicks wooden pegs.

His misty skin,

has no colour.

and every day,

seems to get duller.

His eye you can not see,

his mouth you can not hear.

One thing is sure,

you cannot see him clear

As you tear the wrapper of,You can smell the brand ‘CHOCOLOF’

The best chocolate ever made

You’re surprised that your granny paid

The chocolate is white

And you take a big bite

The texture slides on your tongue_

But something rough passes your lungs

Your legs start to shiver

So does your liver

Your head starts to ache

And you’re barely awake

You look at the wrapper, where it’s been cut

And you find out, that it’s the flavour with nuts

“I forgot about your allergy” says granny

She planned this, which was very canny

Christmas is coming I am so excited,

I can’t wait to tear the wrapper off my presents,

Father Christmas is coming tonight,

Watching each snowflake fall,

I want to play in it more,

Snowman’s, Reindeers, Father Christmas and presents to,

I can’t wait for Christmas to due,

Remember to cover up and stay warm,

Before you freeze anymore,

Mince pies and Christmas dinner,

I can’t wait to win the Christmas crackers,

I want to eat the Christmas pudding,

Sneak down and munch on the ginger bread,

I am eager for Christmas to come.

I wanted to go out side, I love the snow and it is winter. I can’t wait till christmas. I love playing with the wrapping paper and my most favourite game is to climb the chrismas tree. On Christmas Eve dad was outside but the door was open … so I escaped.

The family are all trying to find me out in the darkness…

Today it is the best day of my life!!!

I shall tell you why.

It was a dull, day…

suddenly it was really sunny!

I felt boiling hot and I was melting.

“phwee” I said.

It had cooled down!

Happily, I could go to the seaside,

then it began to RAIN again…

Your knowledge is power,

your kindness is magic.

Not having both,

can be rather tragic.

Love and compassion,

will make people glow.

Facts and infomation,

will put them into the know.

So remember in life,

to be kind to others,

and treat those around you,

like sisters and brothers.

Lily gasped for air. Choking, she struggled towards the sandy shoreline. But each time she managed to pull forward, the beach seemed to move farther away. Her teeth chattered uncontrollably, and her cheeks were tinted with a faint bluish color. A wave forced Lily under. She fought her way back up to the surface. Finally, her head broke through. Water droplets rolled off her face, silently falling back into the ocean. The dark, bottomless ocean. A soft, slimy fish brushed the bottom of Lily’s foot, making her squeal. Another wave tumbled towards Lily. It crashed overhead. She sputtered, spitting out the salty ocean water. Everything was happening so fast. Lily searched the vast sea in vain, hoping to find a boat, a raft, anything! Then a huge wave – the biggest Lily had ever seen – came surging towards her. Lily shrieked. She kicked and flailed her arms, but her attempts at escaping failed . . .

Lily sat straight up in bed. She slowly raised her hand to her face. It was damp with sweat.
‘I’m okay. I’m okay,’ she told herself.

She sucked in a shaky breath and forced her racing heart to return to it’s normal pace. Lily had been having nightmares for the last two weeks. She glanced over at the window. Grimy sunlight filtered through. A light drizzle misted the beach below. It wasn’t a beautiful day, but considering that she was at Hebe’s Beach, it was probably the best one that Lily had experienced so far. She shook her head, trying to clear the dream from her mind. But Lily could never get rid off the memory. Not really. The ocean had changed her life forever.

One moment, they were wading in the water, smiling and waving for their only daughter to come join them. The next, they had disappeared from view. A choked sob escaped from Lily’s throat. She hadn’t thought about her parents at all since the drowning. Everything that had happened was just a jumbled up blur in the back of Lily’s mind. The lifeguards trying to find them, people crying. . .

Then Grandma and Grandpa had come, whisked Lily away and plopped her down in their home in The Middle of Nowhere, otherwise known as Hebe’s Natural Beach Resort.

‘Lil, honey! You awake?’ Grandma’s plump figure appeared in the doorway, ‘come on, slowpoke! Get into your bathing suit, and we can wade in the water, or maybe even swim a little.’

Tears welled up in Lily’s eyes. How could Grandma be so. . .so senseless! So uncaring! Didn’t she know that the water had hurt Lily? It’s gentle currents had once flowed through Lily’s very veins. Swimming had been her second nature. But then the water had grown rougher, crashing into her heart, tearing it to pieces. Lily turned her face away. She couldn’t bear to look at her grandma’s smile. Her big, goofy smile. She was acting like nothing had happened. But something had happened. And Lily wasn’t ready to accept the facts. Not yet. They weren’t really gone. They weren’t! They couldn’t be. Lily’s tears slowly leaked out. They dripped down her cheeks. She didn’t bother to wipe them away.

‘Lily, sweetie,’ Grandma sat down on Lily’s bed. A slow tear trickled down Grandma’s rosy cheek. ‘I know it’s hard. It. . .it’s for me, too.’

Grandma’s voice was full of concern and sympathy. But Lily didn’t want concern, or even sympathy. She wanted her mother and father.

‘No, NO!’ she shrieked.

She pushed Grandma’s arm away, and blindly ran down the winding staircase. She tripped, and went sprawling on the ground at the foot of the stairs.

‘Lily! Lily! Wait, please!’ Lily pushed herself up. She just wanted to be alone.

The rain greeted Lily as she burst through the door. It had gotten worse since that morning, and it’s sharpness surprised her. The raindrops pierced her skin, but she kept going. Her toes dug into the moist sand, leaving tracks.

‘Lily! Come back, Lily! We can talk abut this!’

Grandma’s voice sounded distant, muffled by the pounding rain. But Lily didn’t stop. She hurried on through the storm, wrapping her arms around her head to soften the rain’s harsh blow.

Before Lily knew what was happening, she was waist-deep in the salty ocean water. She gasped, and her knees buckled. Lily closed her eyes, and for a minute she was afraid that she was going to faint. She just stood there, letting the waves gently lap at her legs. A crab scuttled over Lily’s toe, but she didn’t flinch. Lily’s head spun in slow circles and her eyes became cloudy, remembering. She could feel her mother’s spirit, and she could hear father’s laugh. She could see her mother’s smile, and she could smell her father’s pipe. But most of all, Lily could taste their love. It was mixed with the aftertaste of her salty tear. She opened her mouth and gulped in large breaths of ocean air, screaming with the sheer joy of it.Her tears of happiness and sadness cascaded down to the depths of the ocean. And she knew that she was never alone.

By Kimran