I have been experimenting the up-to-date, new 2 in 1 super coat. I think itβs brilliant and very useful. Observing, the coat Iβve found some great things about the coat and some things that could be better.
Suitable for both boys and girls and it has a fleece for extra warmth which can be zipped out if needed. The outer layer is waterproof and both layers are made of lightweight material to make it better to wear. The reflective strips are means you can be seen in the dark. Both layers have elastic cuffs to help stop draughts getting inside the coat. Finally it has a mobile pocket, which is useful to help keep your mobile safe.
The things I thought that needed to be better, was the safety light. I it might get broken and may add weight. Although the coat has a fixed hood, a removable on would add greater flexibility. The coat has four pockets in each layer with buttons but it may be better to use zips!
Overall I thought it was a great coat that could be improved with minor adjustments.
Sounds like a great idea Riya.
We liked your story Riya. We liked your title!!
This is a really good story. We like the story alot!!! π π π π
Sorry to say this is not a story it’s a reveiw of a made up coat I tried out.