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The boy sat by his work.

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  1. In the early hours of the morning,the proud schoolboy,who had just had his breakfast,sat comfortably by his awe-inspiring,shockingly brilliant piece of numeracy work about algebra.

  2. The 10 year old boy, who was getting told off, was looking at his boring work but he was not bothering to do anything about it!

  3. The young, proud, knowledgeable schoolboy, who had just got downstairs from playing with his toys, accidently tripped into a seat by his homework,on the page of his literacy, In the late hours of the evening.

  4. In the early hours of the morning, the bored teenager lay lazily on the desk, as the teacher shouted at him destressed, and furiously.

  5. Tierd and stressed, worried and sleepy the boy sat and did his extremely hard maths paper, meanwhile his teacher was nagging.

  6. In the late hours of the evening, teenage boy sat Depressed,anxious,worried and tired, while doing his incredibly hard maths paper

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