(Miss Gaze) Basic Skills : Who can make this sentence more effective by using SNOT?

In the evening, the children danced on the sand.

11 thoughts on “(Miss Gaze) Basic Skills : Who can make this sentence more effective by using SNOT?

  1. In the morning, the children, who were only 6 years of age, danced happily to the sound of the music at the Beach.

  2. In the early hours of the morning, the small infants danced away on the wet, golden soft and smooth sand, while the calm waves washed upon the beach.

  3. In the late hours of the night, the spirited toddlers, who had blessfull results, swayed merrily across the golden sand at the busy beach!

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