Jaiden’s goal scorer!

There it was in front of me the ugly, drooling beast. Its rotten, scaly hand shot out towards me. Doomed. I thought I was dead. But I was too far so it stepped out of the shadows and ran towards me. So I ran, its revolting hands striking at me like bolts of lightning. I was terrified. As I was running I noticed a door at the right of the tunnel. So I ran towards the door and opened and… bang!!! I slammed the door! The thing was banging on the door. I locked the door and barricaded it. I rapidly searched for weapons or food. I found a gun and a knife but there was no bullets in the gun but the knife was fine. I carried on looking. All I found was junk but then I found a scabbard for a big dagger. The dagger was in it so I clipped the scabbard on my trousers. I looked up and saw a trap door. The beast was smashing the door so…

 

I left Mr M on a cliffhanger! It’s up to you to make up your own ending!!

4 thoughts on “Jaiden’s goal scorer!

  1. Fantastic writing Jaiden!! You deserve to be a goalscorer. I`ll try and make up an ending for the story. πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

  2. Well done Jay. In class,I remember Mr M telling you off in a joke way for leaving him on a cliffhanger when he marked your book. LOL.

  3. Wow Jaiden that made me actually scared. It is a good thing that you left Mrs More on a cliff hanger. otherwise he would have already been shaking by the story.

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