Kensuke’s Kingdom, What a book!! Goal Scorers

Dear diary,

Today I am going to Fareham. To see some surprise, well, that’s what dad says. Finally, we got out of the train, dad was there, bright eyed and filled with laughter. He took us where we had to go. I was confused because all we could see was sparkling, glistening, and fresh water. But then dad shouted, “-Meet my new friend Peggy Sue.” Then I looked at mom she was confused just like me. After dad explained to me and mom we weren’t confused anymore. WE WERE GOING AROUND THE WORLD! I was really excited because we might have been the first family to go around the world in our area and just think we will see all the countries. Everyone was excited. This was a lifetime opportunity. So I had to go. This is going to be a challenging adventure!  

See you later,  Aniq


I think Kensuke’s Kingdom would have a,

Sky which shimmers golden like a medal,

Water which sparkles like stars in the night sky.

Trees which are greener than any other green tree,

Sand which is as white as snow.

Monica  Y5


“Where am I?” He said to himself as he slowly opened his eyes. Silence was the only thing I could hear. Anxiously, the man stood up, he crept across the room to reach the ominous looking handle. The cold air grabbed his skin like a ghost in the dark. Finally, he could feel the handle, he opened the door and a vivid light flashed in the hallway. He could now properly see his room it was damaged, damp and dusty, like a bone in a dead body.

Frantically, he crept across the hallway “ Warning, danger, do not enter.” Said the signs that were splattered across the deep, black walls. What would you think to yourself if you were in this problematic journey? “ GO DO IT.” Begged a voice in his head! “ Go now it is your only chance.”

He turned around sprinting he could almost reach the door. BANG! He  was dead…



4 thoughts on “Kensuke’s Kingdom, What a book!! Goal Scorers

  1. Wow! You should all be very proud of your writing. I can already see how you are up-levelling your writing to become fantastic Year 5 writers…

    You should be very proud of yourselves. Great Goal scoring writing!

  2. Amazing description Monica! Aniq and Zuzzana
    your writing is fantastic. I agree with you Mrs Daniels
    you do deserve to have a goal scorer. Well done guys, oh and
    Mrs Daniels how is your new class going???

  3. Brilliant piece of writing Zuzanna. I love how you put the speech at the start. Yeah you really deserved a goal scorer!

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