Hercules was staring into the distance. His eyes were as shiny as gold. His hair was wrapped around his head like a turban. He held his golden sword in the air and showed off his skills. He slays all kinds of powerful beasts with the help of his fire breathing bird that is always floating swiftly through the air like a great dragon. His cloak, which is made out of lion fur, protected him from lurking evils in the dark shadowy forest. Hercules does not fear anything.
Rayan,
I really like your use of adjectives and verbs in this character description. Well done.
Ms Tonks from Shireland Collegiate Academy
I agree Ms Tonks It’s really is great so well done 8)