HERCULES
Hercules is more destructive than a vicious, bloodthirsty giant. He can be aggrisive and dangerous when he need to be. His musculer arms rip his clothes. His legs are as strong as steel bars and his eyes are as black as shadows of twilight. His hair is as yellow as the shimmering sun. When he speaks even the birds stop and listen to him. He is so powerful that he can carry the whole world on his back. However when he smiles the world smiles with him. All of his actions make princesses want to marry him.
Hadous(My mythical creture)
His jagged horns are as powerful as a soild rock. He runs like a cheatah and when he roars even the bravest knight backs away. His hench shoulder is an oak tree.
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Joshan a FANTASTIC decription of Hercules. I got a clear image of him in my imagination.
Thanks!!
I got really hooked in your description. I also love the wow words. Well done Joshan
I like your descriptions Joshan and how you made your own.
great descriptions!!! well done you used lots of similes and metphors!!
Well, i didn`t do lots of metphors! but thanks for the comment
Cool description Joshan. Iloved your wowo words especially liked your 1st sentence it was amazing.
Fantastic description Joshan I have now got a clear image in my head!
Joshan your descriptions are so impressive. At Shireland we are thinking of having a Gifted & Talented Writers Day – you must come!
I would love to come to your thrilling school sir, but I will have to check if I am available on the day. Hopefully I will be!
wll done joshan you i description is very good.