I wrote this at home. What do you think?
Hello and welcome to Bearwood’s News with me Amy Hopper.
I am saddened to tell you about yesterday at the Costa Concordia which had just set sail and had sunk at approximately 9:30.
According to the chairmen they believe that ‘Human error is to blame’, and they certainly don’t take responsibility for the incident and they’re certain that it is the captains fault and not theirs. But according to the captain it is not his fault and that the rocks weren’t on his map! But he doesn’t have any excuses for abandoning the ship, And there is great news to end from the Italian government- Captain Francisco (aged 52) will be in jail for the rest of his life. That’s it for today at Bearwood’s News.
From Zoe
Please comment thank you
I love your blog post Its great I like the way when you was in character. Zoe the more you do blog post the more you get better at it. Keep up the good work.
Well Done Zoe your report is fabulous but I think you should have a more longer monolouge.
Will do thank you Aaliya 8)
Its a great start and you kept it very formal along the way
simrans mom
well it sounds intresting what you are doing at school
We are learning about the `Costa Concordia’ that sunk in January 🙁 🙁
Great news report Zoe. It is phenominal. Keep it up 😎
Thank you all for commenting I am really grateful 8) 8) 8) 8) 8)