Charlie: One wonka’s Whipple-Scrumptious Fudge-mallow Delight. {Charlie places down the damp fifty pence.}
{The plump man turns around and gets a Wonka’s Whipple-Scrumptious Fudge-mallow Delight.}
{Charlie grabs the chocolate and starts to wolf’s it down .}
Shopkeeper: You looked like wanted that one sonny.
{Charlie nods his mouth bulging with chocolate.}
Shopkeeper: Take it easy, It’ll give you a tummy ache if you swallow it like that.
{Charlie carries on wolfing the chocolate down.}
{Charlie is quite out of breath when he finishes the chocolate.}
Charlie: I think.{says it quietly} I think … I’ll have another one of those chocolates,the same kind as before ,please.
Shopkeeper: Why not ? { Grabbing another Whipple-Scrumptious Fugde mallow Delight.}
{ Charlie slowly tears the chocolate.} {A flash of gold peeps out.}
Shopkeeper: I’ts a golden ticket! {Screaming loudly.}
Great playscript Eliot. 🙂
I agree Iyka great work Eliot.
Wow.
I liked that script.