The boy looked up.

The cat ran to his  house.

This sentence makes me yawn because  it is dull.

Can you change the verb?

The cat zoomed to his house.

Can you drop in  adjectives and adverbs?

The skinny cat zoomed to his gigantic house.

Can you drop in a conjunction?

The skinny cat zoomed to his gigantic house because he was being chased by a dog.

Can you drop in additional information or clauses?

Suddenly, the skinny cat, who never ate his dinner,  zoomed  to his house because he was being chased by a dog.

Up-level this sentence – The boy looked up.

Can you change the verb?

Can you drop in  adjectives and adverbs?

Can you drop in a conjunction?

Can you drop in additional information or clauses?

One thought on “The boy looked up.

  1. Up-level:
    The boy looked up
    The melancholy school boy,who was eating a tasty cheese sandwich,looked up to see his posh mother glaring at him because he was eating white bread and she thought it was wrong because she is posh.

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