Story writing in Year One

In Literacy we have used The Tiger Who Came to Tea to help us to write our own stories with a familiar setting. Here are some of the children’s stories.

Once there was a girl called Nickyla. She was kind and friendly. She lived in a shirt house with her mom and there was a knock at the door. Nickyla wandered who it was. It was a red lion. The lion asked “can I have tea with you?” “Yes” said mom. The lion eat all the food in the kitchen. He eat all the food in one big mouthful. Then the lion drank all the tea and then drank all the water. Then he said “good bye.” Mommy was angry but they went to KFC and had a cheese burger.
By Corde 1N

Once there lived a boy called Hugo he was good and fantastic. He lived with his mom and his mom was beautiful and amazing. They lived in a shiny house. It was clean. They were eating lunch when there was a knock at the door.
Mommy opened the door and a dog said “can I join you for lunch?” Mom said “yes.” So the dog ate everything in the house. He ate everything in one big gulp. Then the dog drank all the water and all of the juice and tea. The dog said “I’ve got to go now bye.” Suddenly magic food appeared and they ate it all. Then they went shopping and came home.
By Karimah 1N

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